This is the rough cut of my media project. It shows the direction my film is taking, however my star has been unable to record voiceover due to unforeseen circumstances, so I lack that, meaning some of the film doesn't make sense, however it shows how my film will look.
Sound quality: Quite a lot of poor sound throughout Joel, did you use a mic? Found images: Some of them are very blurred, can these be replaced with alternatives? I am personally not a fan of the swearing throughout, which means there is a risk your moderator will be put off by this too. I don't feel it adds to the humour at all. It may be worth bleeping the swear words, as this may be more comical. If you do decide to stick with the expletives, you will need to find additional research to tie where this interpretation is coming from.
Think back to the spoof example we watched as a class, they created humour by exaggerating stereotypes which may be a less offensive avenue than just referring to stevenage as somewhere you get stabbed.
Jaspers's interview would benefit from a better location- it is quite clearly a classroom, you could also add titles with his role at the beginning.
Elena talking to camera to finish is a nice touch.
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ReplyDeleteSound quality: Quite a lot of poor sound throughout Joel, did you use a mic?
Found images: Some of them are very blurred, can these be replaced with alternatives?
I am personally not a fan of the swearing throughout, which means there is a risk your moderator will be put off by this too. I don't feel it adds to the humour at all. It may be worth bleeping the swear words, as this may be more comical. If you do decide to stick with the expletives, you will need to find additional research to tie where this interpretation is coming from.
Think back to the spoof example we watched as a class, they created humour by exaggerating stereotypes which may be a less offensive avenue than just referring to stevenage as somewhere you get stabbed.
Jaspers's interview would benefit from a better location- it is quite clearly a classroom, you could also add titles with his role at the beginning.
Elena talking to camera to finish is a nice touch.